vox nihili

I loved it, and everyone else has gone over the grammar and that kind of thing, so I have one thing to say: he can't have autism. Autism is a ...

Other than critiqueing-have you read the last book yet??? Anyway, it was a really well-written piece, with the exception of a few repetitive details, and a few confusing points, (the ...

Good poem, as was mentioned by several other people, but I feel like it bears repeating. You did a good job. However, it could be drastically improved-firstoff, get hold of ...

Uuummm...I didn't exactly get it. The 'that club' part. The mf's club, do you mean? If you don't smile, then do you party? It doesn't make sense. Not to me, ...

wow. real wow. It's amazing how alive your characters are. One thing though: I can't follow your dialogue too well. It's kind of confusing. A very interesting plot, though. I ...

Wow. When you said it was a romance, I didn't think it would start out like that. But I don't know anything about romances. Really catchy, though. I'm hooked. "My ...

Cool! I loved the whole thing, and until the last line, I wondered: where is the cheese? Exactly how does cheese attack, though? It's a really good poem. What would ...

Good job! Very nice poem. I love the way you established the stanzas. But some spelling errors: "From a whirl wind of pain" Whirlwind is one word. "Or that I ...

I thought it did sound a little like the stuff I write when I've got the temptation to blow somebody off. And the thing is, it always works: glad you ...

"as I descent gracefully" descent is a noun. You can't do an object. descend is the proper verb. "I want out, away from confusion, away from a cluttered mind, away ...

Yah. This is a pretty gross poem. But exciting too. I'm about to eat supper...eeww. And I visualized this taking place in my kitchen.... Anyway, you've got some punctuation problems: ...

I'm not against short poems, but this one seems a little jumpy, like a few pieces are missing. Post some more of it, since you have it. I love these ...

A very original plot. I've never heard of an apocalypse-war story narrated with such tantalizing fore-shadowing. You've got a great beginning, however, you've got a few problems with the tenses ...

I've never read anything about vampires before, but, I've got to say, I'm hooked on this one. It's kind of confusing, reading the part about Xandra being Hanna. How old ...

Wow. Lucky, though, that you didn't get in trouble. If I'd done that, I'd have been in BIG trouble. But then I wouldn't have been able to throw a bucket... ...